Paper 1 Rough Draft

Paper 1 Final Draft

Reflection:

For my rough draft, I felt like it wasn’t saying what I wanted it to say. So when I went through the peer reviews it was nice to see and read what the other person thought. I listened to what she said. When I started to edit my rough draft to turn it into my final draft what I needed to work on first was getting what I really wanted to say. I did that then I went back to make sure I didn’t sound like I was repeating myself, fix grammar and spelling. What was learned was that more time should be taken to get my argument out on paper.